Deviation Actions
First: Loki x Reader - Give Me Love Ch1
Next: Loki x Reader - Give Me Love Ch28
(Thanks to my editor-chan Marwissa who helped with this chapter.)
Okay, so Loki was fluffy last chapter, but when stress is introduced, he reverts back to his old-self a little... does that really surprise anyone?
Tell me what you think! (I actually think chapter 26,27,28 all have to be read in one big shot - - kind of like the Hobbit movies - - but, because I'm cruel, I've given you all a whole heap of cliffhangers. :3 You're welcome.) I'm a little worried about staying in 3rd POV for so long, but if it wasn't all one big chunk, there would have been several POV switches that would have been irritating... Also, was Reader-chan irritating? I mean... she can't physically make people stop fighting... but was what she did irritating? (running around, telling people to stop and... you know... stuff...)
So... did it work...? Was the flow okay? (I know I tend to make everything go faster than it probably should....) Tell me!!!! ^o^
Oh, and I found it really interesting that you were all pretty much split in the middle with the whole "pregnancy" thing. All I'm gonna say is that some of you were right, some of you were wrong, and some of you were REALLY wrong. ^^ But I'm not gonna tell you yet~
Review please~!